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I need to escape,

I need to be free.

I must surely run wild.

I long to laugh and see.

Run, run I shall run out of fear.

I will flee from the threat.

I shall go far not near.

A place that is safe,

That is what I need.

I need no familiar face

So, I take off with speed.

Forget what I have left

For it is surely gone.

Time is running out,

They will be awakened by dawn.

So, I gather my things

And swiftly go away.

There's nothing left for me here

And no reason to stay.

But I'll admit, I'm glad that I'm free.

After years of being controlled, I can finally be me.

                                            ~M.E.B.~
                                            08-02-12
The above deviation is an entry to the ESCAPE Contest hosted and organized by #creativitytoconcept

[link] Here is the link to the journal if you guys wish to join. :D

Well it said that I should write about... two sentences on how this portrays escape...so... here goes:

The way this portrays escape is very straightforward and direct to the point. This are the words of a person bereft of freedom and love. The person is saying that he wants to be free of the bonds of which he is a captive. That's all.:D

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Another poem from my harrowed up emotions and problems. Thank God writing was invented! Thank you for reading! :D

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NaturalDreamer18 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
Hey there. I am doing a YouTube channel of Let's Reads and I was wondering if I can narrate this piece? I will give you credit of course. I await your reply.

Have a good day. ^^
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MEBwrittings Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's okay. But I want a reply of the link of your video :D I want to watch it too...if it's not too much trouble ^^;
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NaturalDreamer18 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
[link]

There you go and it was no problem at all. ^^
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MEBwrittings Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Eh? I don't see my piece here ^^;
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NaturalDreamer18 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
Oh! jsahdkjsahdkjsad I thought you meant that you wanted an example first before I read your piece. I'm so sorry. ;w; I misunderstood the text. |||OTL
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Demon-pony64 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student Photographer
Good
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theWitchofGrich Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
lovely
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Me2Smart4U Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
this piece is strong and the contrast sets the mood for the whole poem
....each painted word is very well written :boogie:
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10DarkKnights Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
very very nice, check out my 2 poems
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zara-a-tryste Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Writer
Those are my exact thoughts right now. What are you, psychic?
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